Loom
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Your Eyes Shine Like Death
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Loom
Dec 13, 2008 3:01:15 GMT -8
Post by Loom on Dec 13, 2008 3:01:15 GMT -8
Name: Loomington Knite Worthie
nickname: Loom (Call me any else and Die)
age: 20
power(3 max):Darkness, Water, Walk Through Walls
history/family: Loom was brought up in Georgia(yes, he has an accent). His parents abandoned him at birth. He has no brothers and sisters, that he knows of. His powers were found by accident when he was young. A master of the arts found him and he's been trained in the art of unnatural powers. Most of his life was spent training. He came to Mountain View Academy to meet others, study and learn other techniques.
appearance: View Signature
personality: Queit Type. Likes to observe others and learn. Full of secrets, but probably nothing important to you.
in character sample: Walking away from battlefield, Loom trances his steps in counts of one and twos, trying to regain his stamina. "That was bullshit." He chuckled unearthy to the remains of the world around him. "What to do?" His annoying adversary whispered to himself and within seconds, choked on his own words. Loom waved his arms in circular motions as he forced himself forward back into the face of his hated enemy. The small pieces of water matter tore him into even smaller pieces, leaving him nothing but ash. Loom walked away without another scratch.
code words: Do you know the muffin man
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Raid
Administrator2
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Loom
Dec 13, 2008 9:17:28 GMT -8
Post by Raid on Dec 13, 2008 9:17:28 GMT -8
Mmm... Could definately be better. At least, I hope it could. More detail, more clarity. But, hey, what the hell. You're better than a lot of people here. At least you spell correctly. Approved.
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